Total Score82
Scope - Key teaching and goal identified; appropriately applied to client/group throughout TCA
5
Exceptional
Response is focused and compelling. Details are richly presented in a purposeful and concise way.
4
Proficient

Clearly presented and purposeful response; details could be enriched and more compelling
3
Basic

Clear response that may lack supporting details; may contain unnecessary distracting, and/or superfluous content.
2
Limited

Response is somewhat clear. Some information does not support the central theme, is limited, and/or inconsequential.
0
Not Demonstrated

Topic is not answered, or response is unclear and/or without purpose. And/or the response has been plagiarized.
Feedback on Scope

The key teaching could be more specific: instead of "important", maybe state what it does (strengthens, releases tension, etc...).
The goal should probably specify what you are trying to achieve with the tools (JAPA) and hip muscle strengthening poses - reduce pain, inflammation?

Comprehension of Core Concepts - Demonstrates a clear understanding of concepts from the training and IY with the integration of critical thinking skills in goal and implementation.
5
Exceptional
The response is complex, accurate, comprehensive, & showing breadth and depth of information; relationships are described and conclusions drawn.
4
Proficient

The response identified relationships between concepts, there is some breadth of information, and minor adjustments may be needed
3
Basic

The response presents some accurate information about the concepts, but the response is incomplete and there are some inaccuracies.
2
Limited

The response addresses the assigned task but provides no accurate information about the concepts.
0
Not Demonstrated

The response does not address the assigned task.
Feedback on Comprehension of Core Concepts

It is a very good plan, however, a specific description of the poses would be helpful. And because it would take a lot of words to describe them, choosing fewer poses, only for TCA purposes, would be advised.

Analysis of Key Issues - Shows consideration of specific client/group, IY, core training, and Yoga Therapy.
5
Exceptional
The analysis is well reasoned, logical sequence and rational; Thoughtful and convincing response clearly demonstrates depth of topic knowledge
4
Proficient

Response is well reasoned, logically sequenced, and rational. Although knowledge is demonstrated, the response may not be fully convincing
3
Basic

Response is mostly reasoned, logically sequenced, and rational. Depth of analysis and/or organization and/or topic knowledge may be lacking.
2
Limited

Response is unconvincing and/or disorganized; Response demonstrates an insufficient analysis and/or topic knowledge is not demonstrated.
0
Not Demonstrated

Analysis is not attempted, or the response fails to demonstrate effort or address the central topic.
Analysis of Key Issues Feedback

Good understanding of the client's condition and an excellent thought process when it comes to what remedy needs to be chosen and applied.

Application Key teaching and goal are clearly and appropriately addressed in plan and follow up.
5
Exceptional
The response shows evidence of the ability to apply skills; the response is complete and shows proficiency in the skill.
4
Proficient

The response shows evidence of the ability to apply skills; the response is mostly complete but may have some gaps
3
Basic

The response shows some evidence of the ability to apply skills. The response may have inaccuracies or be incomplete.
2
Limited

The response shows little evidence of the ability to apply skills.
0
Not Demonstrated

The response shows no ability to apply skills.
Application of Key Teaching Feedback

As mentioned earlier, the key teaching and the goal need to be more specific. The plan and follow-up clearly demonstrate the knowledge of the topic and the application to the specific client.

Relevance and Accuracy - Justifies methods and application.
5
Exceptional
Points / assertions are supported by relevant research and references.
4
Proficient

Supporting points are made but research with greater relevance could be integrated
3
Basic

Supporting evidence is not relevant, recent or from questionable sources.
2
Limited

Lacks necessary support for points.
0
Not Demonstrated

No references to support points made.
Relevance and Accuracy Feedback

The references are relevant in supporting the contact, however, more explanation of the references is needed. What do the Sutras 46 and 47 say?

Integration and Originality - Exhibits critical thinking and individualized approach to TCA. Shows a difference between Yoga Teacher and Yoga Therapist approach.
5
Exceptional
Demonstrates critical thinking about the topic and own interpretations. The reasoning is not merely presented but interpreted and applied to core concept.
4
Proficient
Demonstrates critical thinking about the topic and own interpretations. The reasoning is presented but could be better interpreted and applied to core concept.
3
Basic

Lacks some critical thinking about the topic and own interpretations. The reasoning may not be presented and could be better interpreted and applied to the core concept
2
Limited

Lack critical thinking about the topic and the interpretations. The reasoning is not interpreted or applied to core concept.
0
Not Demonstrated

No critical thinking about the topic and the interpretations. The reasoning is not interpreted or applied to core concept.
Integration and Originality Feedback

Excellent knowledge of the topic. A very good application of the knowledge and creative and appropriate remedy modifications and follow-up.

Observations, Recommendations, Alternative Solutions - Reveals significant reflection and understanding of population and key teaching. Displays ability to adapt, adjust, accommodate.
5
Exceptional

Well-reasoned, logical, relevant observations and recommendations on effective solutions to most of the problems/issues. Alternatives are discussed and cover all areas of evaluation.
4
Proficient

Solid, well-thought out observations and recommendations on effective solutions to many of the problems/issues. Alternatives are discussed with some methods to evaluate.
3
Basic

Shallow observations and recommendations on effective solutions to some of the problems/issues. Alternatives are mentioned with a method to evaluate.
2
Limited

Superficial observations and recommendations on effective solutions to a few of the problems/issues. One alternative is mentioned with an evaluation method.
0
Not Demonstrated

No alternatives are given and/or no evaluation method given.
Observations, Recommendations, Alternative Solutions Feedback

Excellent observation and adapting the practice to meet the client's needs, however, there seem to be quite a few poses that the client is being asked to do. Can she remember them and how to do them properly at home? Did you give her pictures of the poses or stick figures with an explanation of how to do them?

Writing Skills and Professional Presentation - TCA is presented in professional manner.
5
Exceptional

Writing is totally free of grammar and spelling errors. Clear, concise, and creative presentation of ideas and properly referenced.
4
Proficient
Competent

There are few spelling or grammatical errors. Most ideas are clearly presented, and references are used.
3
Basic

There are spelling or grammatical errors. Some ideas are clearly presented. References are sporadic or not used.
2
Limited

There are many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. Ideas are hard to follow. References are not used.
0
Not Demonstrated

The paper is illegible and incomprehensible.
Writing Skills and Professional Presentation Feedback

The last two sentences in the Reflection section are not clear.