Total Score97
Scope - Key teaching and goal identified; appropriately applied to client/group throughout TCA
5
Exceptional
Response is focused and compelling. Details are richly presented in a purposeful and concise way.
4
Proficient

Clearly presented and purposeful response; details could be enriched and more compelling
3
Basic

Clear response that may lack supporting details; may contain unnecessary distracting, and/or superfluous content.
2
Limited

Response is somewhat clear. Some information does not support the central theme, is limited, and/or inconsequential.
0
Not Demonstrated

Topic is not answered, or response is unclear and/or without purpose. And/or the response has been plagiarized.
Feedback on Scope

What does "certain adls." mean?
What is a VNS?
Just be sure to clarify any "coding" you use/

Comprehension of Core Concepts - Demonstrates a clear understanding of concepts from the training and IY with the integration of critical thinking skills in goal and implementation.
5
Exceptional
The response is complex, accurate, comprehensive, & showing breadth and depth of information; relationships are described and conclusions drawn.
4
Proficient

The response identified relationships between concepts, there is some breadth of information, and minor adjustments may be needed
3
Basic

The response presents some accurate information about the concepts, but the response is incomplete and there are some inaccuracies.
2
Limited

The response addresses the assigned task but provides no accurate information about the concepts.
0
Not Demonstrated

The response does not address the assigned task.
Feedback on Comprehension of Core Concepts

I appreciate how "wholeheartedly" you embraced your understanding of shoulder impingements and
and the healing process.

Analysis of Key Issues - Shows consideration of specific client/group, IY, core training, and Yoga Therapy.
5
Exceptional
The analysis is well reasoned, logical sequence and rational; Thoughtful and convincing response clearly demonstrates depth of topic knowledge
4
Proficient

Response is well reasoned, logically sequenced, and rational. Although knowledge is demonstrated, the response may not be fully convincing
3
Basic

Response is mostly reasoned, logically sequenced, and rational. Depth of analysis and/or organization and/or topic knowledge may be lacking.
2
Limited

Response is unconvincing and/or disorganized; Response demonstrates an insufficient analysis and/or topic knowledge is not demonstrated.
0
Not Demonstrated

Analysis is not attempted, or the response fails to demonstrate effort or address the central topic.
Analysis of Key Issues Feedback

Your understanding from the course, as a physical therapist assistant, and a yogi supports your understanding and knowledge and application of your goal!
Including journaling for yourself, as a regular practice of self-inquiry and discoveries, is a wonderful yoga therapist tool.

Application Key teaching and goal are clearly and appropriately addressed in plan and follow up.
5
Exceptional
The response shows evidence of the ability to apply skills; the response is complete and shows proficiency in the skill.
4
Proficient

The response shows evidence of the ability to apply skills; the response is mostly complete but may have some gaps
3
Basic

The response shows some evidence of the ability to apply skills. The response may have inaccuracies or be incomplete.
2
Limited

The response shows little evidence of the ability to apply skills.
0
Not Demonstrated

The response shows no ability to apply skills.
Application of Key Teaching Feedback

I would like to see how integrating or pondering anandamaya kosha would impact the physical challenge of your shoulder impingement.
When you ask "what is the injury teaching me?" perhaps this is the lead in to anandamaya kosha.

Relevance and Accuracy - Justifies methods and application.
5
Exceptional
Points / assertions are supported by relevant research and references.
4
Proficient

Supporting points are made but research with greater relevance could be integrated
3
Basic

Supporting evidence is not relevant, recent or from questionable sources.
2
Limited

Lacks necessary support for points.
0
Not Demonstrated

No references to support points made.
Relevance and Accuracy Feedback

I recognize that you mentioned ease / dis-ease and panchamaya model as a discussion in HBED. By adding a little more, for example, how the two relate or a line or quote from your program or manual would provide greater relevance and support.

Integration and Originality - Exhibits critical thinking and individualized approach to TCA. Shows a difference between Yoga Teacher and Yoga Therapist approach.
5
Exceptional
Demonstrates critical thinking about the topic and own interpretations. The reasoning is not merely presented but interpreted and applied to core concept.
4
Proficient
Demonstrates critical thinking about the topic and own interpretations. The reasoning is presented but could be better interpreted and applied to core concept.
3
Basic

Lacks some critical thinking about the topic and own interpretations. The reasoning may not be presented and could be better interpreted and applied to the core concept
2
Limited

Lack critical thinking about the topic and the interpretations. The reasoning is not interpreted or applied to core concept.
0
Not Demonstrated

No critical thinking about the topic and the interpretations. The reasoning is not interpreted or applied to core concept.
Integration and Originality Feedback

I love your discovery of how the panachamaya model supports and moves beyond just the physical knowing and "treating" of shoulder impingement. This is truly an approach taken from a yoga therapy lense!

Observations, Recommendations, Alternative Solutions - Reveals significant reflection and understanding of population and key teaching. Displays ability to adapt, adjust, accommodate.
5
Exceptional

Well-reasoned, logical, relevant observations and recommendations on effective solutions to most of the problems/issues. Alternatives are discussed and cover all areas of evaluation.
4
Proficient

Solid, well-thought out observations and recommendations on effective solutions to many of the problems/issues. Alternatives are discussed with some methods to evaluate.
3
Basic

Shallow observations and recommendations on effective solutions to some of the problems/issues. Alternatives are mentioned with a method to evaluate.
2
Limited

Superficial observations and recommendations on effective solutions to a few of the problems/issues. One alternative is mentioned with an evaluation method.
0
Not Demonstrated

No alternatives are given and/or no evaluation method given.
Observations, Recommendations, Alternative Solutions Feedback

You are clearly aware and accessing vijnanamaya kosha and embracing the Human Body Ease and Disease course. I believe there has been an "AHA' discovery!
Have you considered anandamaya kosha?

Writing Skills and Professional Presentation - TCA is presented in professional manner.
5
Exceptional

Writing is totally free of grammar and spelling errors. Clear, concise, and creative presentation of ideas and properly referenced.
4
Proficient
Competent

There are few spelling or grammatical errors. Most ideas are clearly presented, and references are used.
3
Basic

There are spelling or grammatical errors. Some ideas are clearly presented. References are sporadic or not used.
2
Limited

There are many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. Ideas are hard to follow. References are not used.
0
Not Demonstrated

The paper is illegible and incomprehensible.
Writing Skills and Professional Presentation Feedback

A couple of little spelling errors
"I due truly"
Was this suppose to be "shift"?? LOL
"we're dynamic beings that are meant to shit, change and grow."

Mary Kay, this is a wonderful TCA. It is great to read about your discoveries and the power of approaching your own injury through the lense of the panchamaya Kosha model. Well done!